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I heard homework when 7p.m. So I usually heard homework finish the free talking.

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Good day, Rick!^^

I was actually asking you about your thoughts whenever you hear the word 'homework'.
It's okay. At least you tried. We can just talk about this later in class.
See you later then. I hope you enjoy the rest of your day!^^

__T. Mayleen :)


I heard homework when 7p.m. So I usually heard homework finish the free talking.
>>> I usually do my homework at 7 p.m. I finish it after our free talking class.
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