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2023-09-14 1915

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I just ask you why do you learn English. The motivation is crucial when you study English. The lack of motivation make it impossible to improve you English skills.

I have my own motivation which is passing the exam and adapting to the US from November. But i always think it is difficult to study English and you can¡¯t feel satisfaction for improving your skills. That¡¯s because your skill will be improved gradually.

So if you can¡¯t persevere the long time to get your goal, don¡¯t try study English. I just recommend using the translator when you need to have conversation with other in English hahahaha

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I could not agree with you more on your point, Jun! We cannot improve our English skills overnight and that is the tough reality. Most second language learners have to study for years to master English. In my case, I have studied this language since kindergarten, and I could only confidently use it until I was in my third year of college. However, even until now, I still continue to learn English. Small progress is still progress. -Faith-
I just ask you why do you learn English. 
>> I will just ask you why you want to learn English. 
The motivation is crucial when you study English. 
>> CORRECT
The lack of motivation make it impossible to improve you English skills.
>> The lack of motivation makes it impossible to improve your English skills.
I have my own motivation which is passing the exam and adapting to the US from November. 
>> As for me, I have my own motivation which is to pass the exam for a training in the United States from November.
But i always think it is difficult to study English and you can¡¯t feel satisfaction for improving your skills. That¡¯s because your skill will be improved gradually.
>> However, I always think it is difficult to study English and I can¡¯t feel the satisfaction of improving my skills because  they will be improved gradually.
So if you can¡¯t persevere the long time to get your goal, don¡¯t try study English.
>> Therefore, if you can¡¯t persevere for a long time to reach your goal, don¡¯t try to study English.
I just recommend using the translator when you need to have conversation with other in English hahahaha'
>> I just recommend using a translator when you need to have a conversation with someone in English.
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