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What countries have you been to? Which is your best trip? What about the worse?
A.I went to Bali. It was too hot! And my best trip was went to Japan. It had lots of delicious food, and many fun places.
My worse trip was to first trip in Bali, because I was very sick.

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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
A.I went to Bali. 
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR> I have been to Bali.
It was too hot! 
>>> CORRECT~!^^
And my best trip was went to Japan.
>>> My best trip was in Japan.
 It had lots of delicious food, and many fun places.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
My worse trip was to first trip in Bali, because I was very sick.
>>> My worse trip was in Bali, because I was very sick.
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