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I doubt whether or not between the mother and mother's relationship is real family.

Stalking is one of the bad crimes that continuosly harass others.

Why is she obsessed with her daughter as much as doing stalking?

Why does the daugher hate her mom?

This is not general situation .

Although it shows stalking crime in externally but they might be have deep problems in famillies' conflict.

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I doubt whether or not between the mother and mother's relationship is real family.
>>> I doubt whether the mother and daughter's relationship is a real family.

Stalking is one of the bad crimes that continuously harass others.
>>> CORRECT!

Why is she obsessed with her daughter as much as doing stalking?
>>> CORRECT!

Why does the daughter hate her mom?
>>> CORRECT!

This is not general situation.
>>> This is not a common situation.

Although it shows stalking crime in externally but they might be have deep problems in famillies' conflict.
>>> Although it shows stalking is a crime and externally they might have deep problems in families' conflict.
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