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Which friend makes you laugh a lot?

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In my friends I laugh friends are Gun Ho Lee, Sung Won Choi, And Jeeho Lee.
Gen Ho Lee is clouse and We're Poket'mon play Poket'mons.
And Sung Won choi is Poket'mon play traner.
And lastly Jeeho Lee is me and I Jee ho, we went Happy Ice cream.
These are my friends are makes me laugh friends.

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Hi Henry!

See you tomorrow ^^

T. DON

In my friends I laugh friends are Gun Ho Lee, Sung Won Choi, And Jeeho Lee.
Gen Ho Lee is clouse and We're Poket'mon play Poket'mons.
And Sung Won choi is Poket'mon play traner.
And lastly Jeeho Lee is me and I Jee ho, we went Happy Ice cream.
These are my friends are makes me laugh friends.

>> The friends which makes me laugh a lot are Gun Ho Lee, Sung Won Choi and Jeeho Lee. Gen Ho Lee is close to me and we are Poket'mons buddies. Sung Won choi is a Poket'mon trainer. And lastly, Jeeho Lee and I, went to a Happy Ice cream. These are my friends that make me laugh a lot.
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