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To release my stress

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When I get some stressed I try to run. Running makes me release the stress. I can control my emotions with it. A sound mind dwells in a sound body. And it makes me that can endure against stress.

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Good morning, Thomas!

I think you know too well how to handle your stress. Running is life freedom, every step makes you closer to another destination. I totally agree that a sound body gives us comfort knowing that we are doing our bodies a good favor.

Therefore, run when you are stressed or simply run when you want to. It keeps you active, alert, and it releases the happy hormones you need.

Study the suggestions I made on your homework and determine the patters well. You did excellently!

See you next week!

-T. Donna~

When I get some stressed I try to run. 
>> When I get some stress I try to run. 

Running makes me release the stress. 
>> Correct!

I can control my emotions with it. 
>>  Correct!

A sound mind dwells in a sound body. 
>> Correct!

And it makes me that can endure against stress.
>> And, it makes me endure stress.
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