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How can your government resolve the issue of the aging population?

My government make policies about aging population.

first, they make job for old people.

second, government provide helper that help to old man living alon.

finally, they give basic income to old man

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Thank you for sharing good ways to give all of the elderly security, Min! Most importantly, I hope the birth rate in your country will increase.-Faith-
How can your government resolve the issue of the aging population?
>> CORRECT
My government make policies about aging population.
>> Our government should make policies about aging population.
first, they make job for old people.
>> First, they should make a job for old people.
second, government provide helper that help to old man living alon.
>> Second, the government should provide helpers that help an old man living alone.
finally, they give basic income to old man
>> Finally, they give basic income to old man.
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