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Q.What makes your school special? Why?
A. Many friends and many teachers make school special! Because we learn many things by teachers in school, and when we bored, our friends to play with me and chat all times!

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Hi there Ann! Wow! I was surprised with your essay. It's a bit longer this time. Keep it up. 
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Q.What makes your school special? Why?
A. Many friends and many teachers make school special! 
>>> CORRECT~!^^
Because we learn many things by teachers in school, and when we bored, our friends to play with me and chat all times!
>>> Because we learn many things from our teachers in school, and when we get bored, our friends play and chat with us all the time!
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