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The highest building in Korea is Lotte World Tower.

It is 555meters. It has 123 floors.

Lotte World Tower is 5th highest building in the world.

I can see it at my office and home.

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You did a good job providing important information about the building, Melody. I appreciate your quick answer.-Faith-
WRITING TASK: How high is the highest building in your country? Can you please describe it?
>> CORRECT
The highest building in Korea is Lotte World Tower.
>> CORRECT
It is 555meters. It has 123 floors.
>> It is 555meters, and it has 123 floors.
Lotte World Tower is 5th highest building in the world.
Lotte World Tower is the fifth highest building in the world.
I can see it at my office and home.
>> I can see it from my office and home.
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