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What makes you smile today?

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I makes smiles are friends, Lego class and english class.
friends are I met friends.
And english class is we did game.
And lastly a Lego class is we did lego class.
These are I makes smile today.

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Hi Henry!

Thank you for doing your homework! See you again ^^

T. DON

I makes smiles are friends, Lego class and english class.
friends are I met friends.
And english class is we did game.
And lastly a Lego class is we did lego class.
These are I makes smile today.

>> My friends, Lego class and English class make me smile. It makes me smile when I meet my friends. It also makes me smile when we play games in our English class. And lastly, it makes me smile when we play in our Lego class. These are the things that makes me smile today.
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