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Here's for your homework:
[ESSAY] In 3~5 sentences, write a composition using some or all of the vocabulary or expressions below:
1. typhoon season; rainy season
2. frequent
3. power outage; blackout; brownout
4. navigate
5. long queue

When I was in the Philippines, it was typhoon season. So there was a lot of rain while I'd studied. One of the bad things was there were frequent blackouts in Baguio, especially during raining. It's hard to repair Baguio power system directly because it's not easy to navigate to Baguio which is located on the high mountain. Normally, during power outage, me and my friends evacuated to SM mall till it's done. But the other bad thing was after finishing blackout, there was such a long queue because everyone wanted to get on the taxi to go back there home.

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Here's your edited homework, Jaden!
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Jean~~




[ESSAY] In 3~5 sentences, write a composition using some or all of the vocabulary or expressions below:
1. typhoon season; rainy season
2. frequent
3. power outage; blackout; brownout
4. navigate
5. long queue



When I was in the Philippines, it was typhoon season. 
>> OR: It so happened that I went to the Philippines during their typhoon season. 

So there was a lot of rain while I'd studied. 
>> So it rained a lot when I was studying there. 

One of the bad things was there were frequent blackouts in Baguio, especially during raining. 
>> One of the worst things was that there were frequent blackouts in Baguio, especially when it was raining. 

It's hard to repair Baguio power system directly because it's not easy to navigate to Baguio which is located on the high mountain. 
>> It is hard and takes time to repair the Baguio power system because it's not easy to navigate Baguio, which is located in a mountainous region. 

Normally, during power outage, me and my friends evacuated to SM mall till it's done. 
>> Normally, me and my friends hung out in SM mall during the power outage and would head back when the power was restored. 

But the other bad thing was after finishing blackout, there was such a long queue because everyone wanted to get on the taxi to go back there home.
>> But the drawback to spending time there was that after the electricity was back, there was always a long queue at the taxi stand because everyone wanted to get in a taxi to go back home. 
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