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Where do you see yourself in 5 years?

작성자: 이*윤
2023-10-23 2910

회원님의 영작문

I tried hard to join this company.
Let me be honest with you.
What the future holds for me is still uncertain at this point.
However, I can definitely see myself as an intelligent asset for this company and hoping that it will be this company member.
I have experience for two years. I do know that this job experience will play an important role in helping me make important decision in your company's future.
So, there are my fianl goals in this company.
I am very passionate, professional about this job and I always see to it that I finish what I've started.
As long as I am intelligent company member, then I intend to grow professionally in this company for the next five years.
Five years from now, I see myself as a professor in computer engineering field.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good morning, Yun. This is great. I strongly believe you'll be in a better position and living better five years from now. I also believe your passion and professionalism will lead you to success in the next five years. Good luck with your aspirations! 😊 Thanks for this. See you in class tomorrow. ^^
~T. Jade^^
Homework: Where do you see yourself in 5 years?
I tried hard to join this company.
>> Correct
>> OR: I made a strong effort to become a part of this company.
Let me be honest with you.
>> Correct
What the future holds for me is still uncertain at this point.
>> Correct
However, I can definitely see myself as an intelligent asset for this company and hoping that it will be this company member.
>> Correct
>> OR: However, I can definitely see myself as a valuable asset to this company and hope to become a member of it.
I have experience for two years. 
>> Correct
I do know that this job experience will play an important role in helping me make important decision in your company's future.
>> Correct
>> OR: I know that this job experience will play an important role in helping me make crucial decisions for your company's future.
So, there are my fianl goals in this company.
>> So, these are my final goals in this company.
I am very passionate, professional about this job and I always see to it that I finish what I've started.
>> Correct
>> OR: I am very passionate and professional, and I always ensure that I finish what I've started efficiently and on time.
As long as I am intelligent company member, then I intend to grow professionally in this company for the next five years.
>> Correct
>> OR: As long as I am a valuable member of this company, I intend to grow professionally in this company for the next five years.
Five years from now, I see myself as a professor in computer engineering field.
>> Correct
>> OR: Additionally, five years from now, I see myself as an expert professional in the computer engineering field.
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