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Q: Why do you think other people love collecting rocks?
A: I think some people love collecting rocks because they like collecting various kinds of things.
I know that some people like collecting various things because they find it interesting to see those things that they collected before.
But others don't like it because they don't like keeping a lot of things in their house.

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Hi, Paul! 

Thank you for answering your homework!

Here are some things to take note of:

1. I think some people love collecting rocks because they like collecting various kinds of things.
>>CORRECT!

2. I know that some people like collecting various things because they find it interesting to see those things that they collected before.
>>I know that some people like collecting various things because they find it interesting to see those things that they have collected before.

3. But others don't like it because they don't like keeping a lot of things in their house.
>>However, other people don't like it because they don't like keeping a lot of things in their house.
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