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Q: Do you think that all grandparents are loving to their grandchildren? Why or why not?
A: I think not all but most of the grandparents love their grandchildren.
It's because most people are naturally made to love their child, and grandchildren are their child's children.
But for others, they may not love their grandchildren because they have a special reason.

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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some points to consider from your answer:

1. I think not all but most of the grandparents love their grandchildren.
>>I think not all, but most grandparents love their grandchildren.

2. It's because most people are naturally made to love their child, and grandchildren are their child's children.
>>CORRECT!

3. But for others, they may not love their grandchildren because they have a special reason.
>>However, for others, they may not love their grandchildren for some special reasons.
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