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How do you deal with days when you don\'t feel like working out?

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On days when I don't want to exercise, I make a special opportunity for exercise.
First of all, I leave my house and walk around the nearby park with my family and go to the mart.
Sometimes, I eat delicious food to create an motivation to exercise.
Wouldn't it be killing two birds with on stone to eat delicious food and make an opportunity to exercise?
When I really don't want to do it, I think it's timee to rest and do light exercise, but I also wear earphones and stretch for a short time.
Oh, come to think of it, I haven't taken a break from exercising except for the reason I'm sick or injured since last February.

P.S. : Let's keep seeing each otehr in the future! I've been signing up for your classes! I look forward to your continued support! See you next Monday!

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Good afternoon, Yun! Great work! You've found clever ways to stay active even on those days when you don't feel like working out. Keep it up, and your dedication to exercise is truly admirable! Also, sure thing, Yun! I really do hope to see you as well in the future. God bless you always. Let's continue learning together. 
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Homework: How do you deal with days when you don\'t feel like working out?
On days when I don't want to exercise, I make a special opportunity for exercise.
>> Correct
First of all, I leave my house and walk around the nearby park with my family and go to the mart.
>> First of all, I leave my house and walk around the nearby park with my family, and then I go to the mart.
Sometimes, I eat delicious food to create an motivation to exercise.
>> Sometimes, I eat delicious food to create motivation for exercise.
Wouldn't it be killing two birds with on stone to eat delicious food and make an opportunity to exercise?
>> Wouldn't it be killing two birds with one stone to eat delicious food and create an opportunity to exercise?
When I really don't want to do it, I think it's timee to rest and do light exercise, but I also wear earphones and stretch for a short time.
>> When I really don't want to do it, I think it's time to rest and do light exercise, but I also wear earphones and stretch for a short time.
Oh, come to think of it, I haven't taken a break from exercising except for the reason I'm sick or injured since last February.
>> Oh, come to think of it, I haven't taken a break from exercising except for the times I'm sick or injured since last February.

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