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1. Who is Tasha?
Tasha is the on in white sweater and have brunette short hair.

2. Introduce me to James.
James is the on in blue check shirts and waving hand.

3. I don't know Mia.
Mia is the on in red t-shirts and have blond hair.

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Thank you Angela for your time practicing English through writing! Kindly check the suggestions that I wrote to improve your sentences. Have a good afternoon!
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1. Who is Tasha?
Tasha is the on in white sweater and have brunette short hair.
>>> Tasha is the one in a white sweater and has brunette short hair.

2. Introduce me to James.
James is the on in blue check shirts and waving hand.
>>> James is the one in a blue check shirt and waving his hand.

3. I don't know Mia.
Mia is the on in red t-shirts and have blond hair.
>>> Mia is the one in the red T-shirt and has blond hair.
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