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Subway is the most proud of our country.
1. Our subway is clean and safety.
2. It is almost accurate of arrival and departure time.
3. Trasfering system is also good, so we can go capital area in 1hour by using subway.
4. If you use subway 20days more in a month, you can buy membership card being discounted fee.

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Wow! I heard a lot of good things about your subway system. It is really impressive, Heather. May you always have a safe ride!-Faith-
Subway is the most proud of our country.
>> The subway is the mode of public transportation I am most proud of in our country for the following reasons:
1. Our subway is clean and safety.
>> 1. Our subway is clean and safe.
2. It is almost accurate of arrival and departure time.
>> 2. It is almost accurate of its arrival and departure time.
3. Trasfering system is also good, so we can go capital ar
ea in 1hour by using subway.
>> 3. Its transferring system is also good, so we can go to the capital area in one hour by using the subway.
4. If you use subway 20days more in a month, you can buy membership card being discounted fee.
>> 4. If you use the subway for more than 20 days in a month, you can buy a membership card with a discount.
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