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Homework

작성자: 정*환
2023-11-06 3734

회원님의 영작문

Your question was not difficult however I have never thought about that. So I needed time to think carefully.
Before getting your question, I thought I am perfect for everything.
It was good time to think myself and find out my weakness.
Here is the answer below.

I thought I am perfect for everything, but maybe this might be my weakness in my opinion.
I am not as smart as everyone is.
Let's say there is some test for everyone.
When everyone passed the test at once, on the other hand, I need 3 or more times to pass it.
Despite my weakness, I usually continue to try it until I can make up for it.
I am used to overcoming my weakness.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

WOAH! I didn't think you could have a better answer to the question. I thought you were just going to give me the same thought. While reading your composition, I found myself clapping. HAHAHAH Maybe it was funny to imagine. But honestly how you started your answer was impressive and I didn't expect it that way. Maybe just a little polish on the given situation. I hope you can always clear your mind before you deliver your answer. At the same time, with confidence. ^___________^
-Chammy
Your question was not difficult however I have never thought about that. So I needed time to think carefully.
>>Correct
Before getting your question, I thought I am perfect for everything.
>>Before getting your question, I thought I was perfect for everything.
It was good time to think myself and find out my weakness.
>>It was a good time to think about myself and find out my weaknesses.
Here is the answer below.
I thought I am perfect for everything, but maybe this might be my weakness in my opinion.
>>I thought I was perfect for everything, but maybe this might be my weakness in my opinion.
I am not as smart as everyone.
>>Correct
Let's say there is some test for everyone.
>>Correct
When everyone passed the test at once, on the other hand, I need 3 or more times to pass it.
>>When everyone passed the test at once, on the other hand, I needed 3 or more times to pass it.
Despite my weakness, I usually continue to try it until I can make up for it.
>>Correct
I am used to overcoming my weakness.
>>Correct
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