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2023-11-07 2879

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Q: What would happen if clocks or watches were not invented?
A: I think if there weren't clocks or watches, there weren't be any transportation.
It's because for trains or subways, there shouldn't be more than two of them, and that can be done thanks to clocks.
And people can't make promise if there aren't clocks.

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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework!

Here are some notes to remember:

1. I think if there weren't clocks or watches, there weren't be any transportation.
>> I think if there weren't clocks or watches, there wouldn't be any transportation.

2. It's because for trains or subways, there shouldn't be more than two of them, and that can be done thanks to clocks.
>>It's because for trains or subways, there shouldn't be more than one of them on the same trail, and that can be done thanks to clocks.

3. And people can't make promise if there aren't clocks.
>>Also, people could not make promises if there weren't clocks.
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