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Homework : What is the strangest food you have ever eaten?

작성자: 박*나
2023-11-08 4324

회원님의 영작문

First of all, I don't try to eat strange food.
But, when I was young, I ate rabbit meat. I even remember that it was a rabbit raised at home.
I think the rabbit hurt its leg. Mom cheated on me and fed me the meat.
At that time, I didn't have enough food. She must have thought it was better to eat a wounded rabbit than to just dispose of it.
She cooked it to feed the child nutritionally. I ate rabbit meat deliciously, and I was surprised to find out later that it was rabbit meat.
Since then, I only eat certain foods that are what the ingredients are.

Actually, I'm very picky eater.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Serah! Thank you so much for answering your homework. Please take note of the corrections I made on your sentences. Keep it up! Thank you as well for leaving positive feedbacks on the website for me. I appreciate it so much. See you in class! ^^
- T. Julia
First of all, I don't try to eat strange food.
>> Correct
But, when I was young, I ate rabbit meat.
>> Correct
I even remember that it was a rabbit raised at home.
>> Correct
I think the rabbit hurt its leg.
>> Correct 
Mom cheated on me and fed me the meat.
>> Correct
OR >> My mom tricked me and fed me the meat.
At that time, I didn't have enough food.
>> Correct
She must have thought it was better to eat a wounded rabbit than to just dispose of it.
>> Correct
She cooked it to feed the child nutritionally.
>> She cooked it to provide nutrition for her children. 
I ate rabbit meat deliciously, and I was surprised to find out later that it was rabbit meat.
>>  I ate rabbit meat deliciously and was surprised to find out later that it was rabbit meat.
Since then, I only eat certain foods that are what the ingredients are.
>> Since then, I only eat certain foods when I know what the ingredients are.
Actually, I'm very picky eater.
>> Actually, I'm a very picky eater.
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