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What were your best and worst trips?

작성자: 권*지
2023-11-10 3802

회원님의 영작문

My best trip is went Osaka Japan.
Because that is my first free trip, Not using travel agency!
I like Japan's quiet mood. So I planed appropriate to me.
That experience was interesting!

And I don't have worst trip.. But if I have to pick one that is my honeymoon in bali.
Because I had a terrible stomachache and my husband had a skin pain.
My husband felt happy that he met summer in january. So he suntan his skin without suncream.
It caused pain in his skin..
And I ate a lot of ice because there is hot and humid.
It caused stomachache. So we can't do our schedule 2 days.
But I only felt 2 days memory worst.. another days I really really happy!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Angela, 
Thank you for sharing a story about your trips. Remember that on every trip we shall have something to remember. it may be good or bad,  memories that we will never forget. I also remember my trip to Thailand in 2018. It was both a good and bad memory when we got lost on our way, thankfully a  "Samaritan" helped us find our way back.
enjoy the day!
Aki~

My best trip is went Osaka Japan.
>>> CORRECT!

Because that is my first free trip, Not using travel agency!
>>> Because that was my first free trip, Not using a travel agency!

I like Japan's quiet mood. So I planed appropriate to me.
>>> I like Japan's quiet mood. So I planned what was appropriate for me.

That experience was interesting!
>>> CORRECT!

And I don't have worst trip.. But if I have to pick one that is my honeymoon in bali.
>>> And I don't have the worst trip,  but if I have to pick one that is my honeymoon in Bali.

Because I had a terrible stomachache and my husband had a skin pain.
>>>  Because I had a terrible stomachache and my husband had a pain on his skin.
>>>  Because I had a terrible stomachache and my husband got sunburned.

My husband felt happy that he met summer in January. 
>>>  My husband felt happy that he experienced summer in January. 

So he suntan his skin without suncream.
>>> So he suntan his skin without suncream.

It caused pain in his skin..
>>> CORRECT!

And I ate a lot of ice because there is hot and humid.
>>>  And I ate a lot of ice cream because it was hot and humid.

It caused stomachache. So we can't do our schedule 2 days.
>>> It gave me stomach so we can't follow our schedule for two days.

But I only felt 2 days memory worst.. another days I really really happy!
>>> But those two days are our worst memory, the rest of our trip was fun!

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