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I think children and teenagers have a right to enjoy free speech because it is so important.

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I think children and teenagers have a right to enjoy free speech because it is so important.
Also, I think that if they misbehave and speak due to free speech, they are also responsible.
Freedom is a sweet but responsible burden at the same time.
Therefore, I think the state or parents should tell children how to use freedom of speech correctly.

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Hello Da Hye,

I just wanted to say how awesome your thoughts are on kids and teens having the right to free speech. You nailed it when you said freedom is sweet but also comes with responsibilities. Your idea about guiding them on using free speech correctly is spot-on! Keep being fantastic and sharing your views!

~Teacher Cathy

 

I think children and teenagers have a right to enjoy free speech because it is so important.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I think kids and teens should have the right to express themselves freely because it's important.

Also, I think that if they misbehave and speak due to free speech, they are also responsible.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I also think they should be responsible if they misbehave while expressing themselves freely.

Freedom is a sweet but responsible burden at the same time.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Freedom is sweet but it is also a burden and a responsibility at the same time.

Therefore, I think the state or parents should tell children how to use freedom of speech correctly.

>>CORRECT

OR>>So, I believe it's essential for the state or parents to guide children on the correct use of freedom of speech.

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