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The good thing about staying in one house is that when you travel, you can store your travel items in the house and use them during your stay. On the other hand, what I dislike is that it is inconvenient when deciding on a destination while traveling and that I cannot experience a variety of accommodations.

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Good afternoon, Eliana!
You have a very good point here and thank you for expanding your undertanding on the question.
Enjoy the rest of the day!
Aki~


The good thing about staying in one house is that when you travel, you can store your travel items in the house and use them during your stay
>>> CORRECT!

On the other hand, what I dislike is that it is inconvenient when deciding on a destination while traveling and that I cannot experience a variety of accommodations
>>> CORRECT!
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