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What do I spend my day thinking about most?

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2023-11-23 4861

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I spend my day thinking about my homeworks and important work most.
These days, I have so many homeworks.
There are school, academy homeworks and others.
In other words, I draw my plans in my head to remember and prepare later.
Also, school exams are getting more and more and getting harder, too.
If I don't draw my plans in my head, I can't remember and prepare later.
Thus, my head will burst soon because of that.

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Hi Julie!
I think that this topic is hitting close to home.
You have given me so many details and I'm happy about that.
It shows what your strengths are.
We can now work on the things that confuse and challenge you.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I spend my day thinking about my homeworks and important work most.
>> I spend my day thinking about my homework and important work the most.
These days, I have so many homeworks.
>> These days, I have so much homework.
There are school, academy homeworks and others.
>> They give us homework in school and in our academy.
In other words, I draw my plans in my head to remember and prepare later.
>> Correct
Also, school exams are getting more and more and getting harder, too.
>> Also, school exams are getting harder and harder.
If I don't draw my plans in my head, I can't remember and prepare later.
>> Correct
Thus, my head will burst soon because of that.
>> Thus, my head would feel like it's going to burst because of that. 
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