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I should recognize the existence of chances when chances come for taking them in my life.
Although chances come to me, they are useless if I'm not ready to catch them.
It is really important for people to prepare various things since we don't know when chances will come.
For instance, when the selection of overseas dispatch begins in company, I can apply and get a possibility of selection by preparing speaking skills in advance.

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Practice makes progress!

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I should recognize the existence of chances when chances come for taking them in my life.

>>I should recognize the existence of chances and be ready to seize them when they come into my life. 
Although chances come to me, they are useless if I'm not ready to catch them.

>>Correct.
It is really important for people to prepare various things since we don't know when chances will come.

>>It is crucial for people to be well-prepared since we never know when chances will arise.

For instance, when the selection of overseas dispatch begins in company, I can apply and get a possibility of selection by preparing speaking skills in advance.

>>For instance, when the selection for overseas dispatch begins at the company, I can increase my chances of being selected by preparing my speaking skills in advance.


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