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When I went to travel to USA, I should have communicated with someone only by english. It was not easy but I had studied english in Canada right before, so it was very interesting. My boyfriend who
I went to USA with is not good at English, so whenever we have some issues during that trip, I should have talked with foreigner. Sometimes I couldn't understand someone's English but I could catch the meaning after I asked to repeat a word. I want to talk with someone in English much more if I have a chance.

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Hello, Dami!

Practicing English with someone just like our class can totally be different from conversing with a stranger in The USA. There, they also carry different English varieties as heard from their intonation, nationality, among many other factors.

Nevertheless, you survived and here you are only getting better with the language with constant practice.

So below, please note down the tiny suggestions I made.  Great job!

See you!

-T. Donna~

When I went to travel to USA, I should have communicated with someone only by english. 
>> Correct!
Or: English

It was not easy but I had studied english in Canada right before, so it was very interesting. 
>> Correct!
Or: English

My boyfriend whoI went to USA with is not good at English, so whenever we have some issues during that trip, I should have talked with foreigner. 
>> My boyfriend who I went to USA with is not good at English, so whenever we have some issues during that trip, I should have talked with a foreigner. 

Sometimes I couldn't understand someone's English but I could catch the meaning after I asked to repeat a word. 
>> Correct!

I want to talk with someone in English much more if I have a chance.
>> Correct!

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