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When I am going to get electric home appliances, I depend on ads. Through some ads,I can know the function, design, and appearance. Once I choose some products watching TV commercials, I can compare prices online. That way I can buy some electronical appliances at cheaper prices.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
Thank you for allocating time to do homework even when you are very busy. Yes, TV commercials nowadays are very informative and can provide us with information such as functions and designs. Sometimes, they even compare their products with others to show that theirs are better.
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When I am going to get electric home appliances, I depend on ads. 
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>> OR: When I am going to purchase electric home appliances, I rely on ads.
Through some ads,I can know the function, design, and appearance. 
>> CORRECT
Once I choose some products watching TV commercials, I can compare prices online. 
>> After choosing products by watching TV commercials, I can compare prices online.
That way I can buy some electronical appliances at cheaper prices.
>> In that way, I can buy electronic appliances at cheaper prices.
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