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I don\'t really want to have dual citizenship.

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The good thing about dual citizenship is that you can choose the country that best suits you, and the bad thing is that people with dual citizenship will try to prove their necessity because it is difficult to feel a sense of belonging.
Because of this, I don't really prefer dual citizenship.

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Hi Da Hye, 

Great effort on your homework about dual citizenship! 🌟 You've expressed your thoughts clearly, addressing both the positive and challenging aspects. Sharing your perspective adds depth to your response. Keep up the excellent work Da Hye! 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

The good thing about dual citizenship is that you can choose the country that best suits you, and the bad thing is that people with dual citizenship will try to prove their necessity because it is difficult to feel a sense of belonging. 

>>The good thing about dual citizenship is that you can choose the country that best suits you, and the challenging aspect is that people with dual citizenship may attempt to prove their necessity since it is difficult to feel a sense of belonging.  

Because of this, I don't really prefer dual citizenship. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>This is why I don't really like dual citizenship. 

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