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I went to watch a movie called freddy's pizza store. I don't like popcorn howeverbecause one of my friedn that went together says tyat lets eat it together. I thought it is a not bad choice and i started to eat it however it was so delicious we eat it before movie start. After the movie start, the movies's first part was scary to, so me and my friend had a quiet scream. And at all scary part, we gasped so at the back seat, one person kicked my friend and said be quiet. After the movie end, the movie was really fun. We ate lotteria and also take a picture in christmas tree

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Hello Jude, beautiful day to you! That's good to know that you enjoyed the movie with your friend. You said the movie was scary but you still liked it. Thank you for sharing your experience. I will see you in class. Stay warm and safe!~T. Lyn
I went to watch a movie called freddy's pizza store. 
>>I went to see a movie called Freddy's Pizza Place.
I don't like popcorn howeverbecause one of my friedn that went together says tyat lets eat it together.
>>I don't really like popcorn, but my friend who went with asked me to eat it with him.
I thought it is a not bad choice and i started to eat it however it was so delicious we eat it before movie start. 
>>I thought it was not a bad choice so I started eating it and it was so delicious that I ate it before the movie started.
After the movie start, the movies's first part was scary to, so me and my friend had a quiet scream. 
>>When the movie started,  the first part was so scary that my friend and I screamed quietly.
And at all scary part, we gasped so at the back seat, one person kicked my friend and said be quiet.
>>And in a slightly scary part that left me breathless, a person in the backseat kicked my friend and told him to be quiet.
After the movie end, the movie was really fun. 
>>After the movie ended, the movie was really fun.
We ate lotteria and also take a picture in christmas tree
>>We ate at Lotteria and took pictures at the Christmas tree.
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