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Are there any hobbies or interests that consistently excite you and give you energy?

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There are several hobbies or interests that consistently excite me and give me energy.
Although cultural activities occupy most of them, songs and dramas seem to occupy the largest portion.
I'm enjoying songs and dramas regardless of genre and country, but I'm listening to K-POP more.
As much as I like singing, I went to sing a song a lot when I was stressed out, but I can't go as often as before because of the COVID-19 epidemic.
Drama also has a lot of influence on me, expecially I like romance dramas, when a lovely couple and scenes comes out, there seems to be palpitations.
There days, I think the best way to relax is to watch a movie or a drama without moving in the most comfortable clothes when resting at home.
Going out to eat something delicious seems to be one of them.
The food I eat depends on my mood, but I feel healed when I eat food that suits my emotion.

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Hello, Yun. You sure have diverse interests. Great job expressing your hobbies and how they influence your mood. Keep exploring what makes you happy! Thanks for this. See you tomorrow! :) ~T. Jade^^
Homework: Are there any hobbies or interests that consistently excite you and give you energy?
There are several hobbies or interests that consistently excite me and give me energy.
>> Correct
Although cultural activities occupy most of them, songs and dramas seem to occupy the largest portion.
>> Correct
I'm enjoying songs and dramas regardless of genre and country, but I'm listening to K-POP more.
>> Correct
As much as I like singing, I went to sing a song a lot when I was stressed out, but I can't go as often as before because of the COVID-19 epidemic.
>> As much as I like singing, I used to sing a lot when I was stressed out, but I can't go as often as before because of the COVID-19 epidemic.
Drama also has a lot of influence on me, expecially I like romance dramas, when a lovely couple and scenes comes out, there seems to be palpitations.
>> Drama also has a lot of influence on me, especially I like romance dramas; when a lovely couple and scenes come out, there seems to be palpitations.
There days, I think the best way to relax is to watch a movie or a drama without moving in the most comfortable clothes when resting at home.
>> Correct
Going out to eat something delicious seems to be one of them.
>> Correct
The food I eat depends on my mood, but I feel healed when I eat food that suits my emotion.
>> Correct

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