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One of my habits that bothers me is picking at pimples or squeezing them with my fingernails. After the age of 40, the ability to regenerate decreases and scars remain due to this habit.

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Hi there Eliana!
All of us have bothering habits. hahaha.
Enjoy the day!
Aki~

One of my habits that bothers me is picking at pimples or squeezing them with my fingernails. 
>>> CORRECT!

After the age of 40, the ability to regenerate decreases, and scars remain due to this habit.
>>> CORRECT!
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