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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Do you worry about the rising cost of food?

Yes, I feel scared because everything has become too expensive lately, including the price of the food.
Compare to the price two to three years ago, the price is became high.
Because, overall economic situation is bad than before, so many people are reduce their consumption.
And these days labor costs have increased a lot.
But, almost people's salaries haven't rise up much.
I think that's why many people are reduce their spent money.
Some people said we having a hard time more than pandemic season.

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Hi, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Do you worry about the rising cost of food?


Yes, I feel scared because everything has become too expensive lately, including the price of the food.
>> CORRECT!
Compare to the price two to three years ago, the price is became high.
>> Compared to the price two to three years ago, the price became higher.
Because, overall economic situation is bad than before, so many people are reduce their consumption.
>> Because, overall economic situation is worse than before, so many people reduce their consumption.
And these days labor costs have increased a lot.
>> CORRECT!
But, almost people's salaries haven't rise up much.
>> But, almost all people's salaries haven't risen up that much.
OR >> But, almost all people's salaries haven't increased.
I think that's why many people are reduce their spent money.
>> I think that's why many people reduce their spending.
Some people said we having a hard time more than pandemic season.
>> Some people said we having a hard time more than the pandemic season.

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