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If someone have to suffer the fear to reach the goal.like taking elevater or transportation.
There are 2 ways to overcome.
One is you should try it often.
The other is when you do it.
You should do it with your husband or wife.
And then you feel more comfortable.
I can tell such as experiences and feeling will became beautiful memories .

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Ms Sunny!
Thank you for giving some tips on how to overcome one's fear.
Enjoy the weekend and find ways to have better days!
Aki~

If someone have to suffer the fear to reach the goal.like taking elevater or transportation.
>>> If someone has to suffer the fear to reach the goal like taking elevators or transportation.

There are 2 ways to overcome.
>>> There are two ways to overcome this.

One is you should try it often.
>>> CORRECT!

The other is when you do it.
>>> CORRECT!

You should do it with your husband or wife.
>>> CORRECT!

And then you feel more comfortable.
>>> CORRECT!

I can tell such as experiences and feeling will became beautiful memories .
>>> I can tell such experiences and feelings will become beautiful memories.

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