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작성자: 이*영
2023-12-15 2679

회원님의 영작문

HI Maxine theacher!
I prepared this so So you can fix the part on Excel 1
You can fix the part in the yellow compartment
I beg you, you don't have to fix the time right away!
You can do whatever you want
thanks you!!
bye~~

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Eunyoung! I received the sentences that you wanted me to check in Excel. Next time, you can paste the sentences here because I think Excel files won't be uploaded to the website. Anyhow, I will write my corrections below. I will include your message in the corrections so that you will have more to study and review. See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Maxine 

HI Maxine theacher!

>> Hi, Teacher Maxine!
I prepared this so So you can fix the part on Excel 1

>> I prepared this so that you can fix the part in Excel 1.
You can fix the part in the yellow compartment

>> You may fix the part in the yellow compartment.
I beg you, you don't have to fix the time right away!

>> I'm asking you a favor, but you don't have to do it right away.
You can do whatever you want

>> You can do whatever you want.
thanks you!!

>> Thank you!


The banks in my country are located in Central part are of city so. It's convenient for me visit. I Usually go to 국민 bank in Gwangju. the seat in sit 국민 bank is very clean. I have dust allerg but I didn't have allergic reaction in the KB bank I think their air is so clean so l think that's the reason why I go there.        

>> The banks in my country are located in the central part of the city, so it's convenient for me to visit. I usually go to 국민 bank in Gwangju. The seat in sit 국민 bank is very clean. I have a dust allergy, but I didn't have an allergic reaction in the KB Bank. I think their air is so clean, so I think that's the reason why I go there.

okay My favorite bar is 인생맥주 in hwasun. I particularly enjoy the onion sauce fried potato and 먹태, My absolute favorite. And The long tables and chairs provide an elegant setting. The friendly and entertaining staff make every visit enjoyable. I love the bar so much that I want to go every day.            

>> Okay, my favorite bar is 인생맥주 in Hwasun. I particularly enjoy the onion sauce fried potato and 먹태, my absolute favorite. And the long tables and chairs provide an elegant setting. The friendly and entertaining staff make every visit enjoyable. I love the bar so much that I want to go every day.

I want to go to 토토즐 in 상무지구I here that from my friend. she sad we can enjoy that 토토즐there'er so many handsum guy so we are bukking at night.

>> I want to go to 토토즐 in 상무지구. I heard that from my friend. She is sad, but we can enjoy that 토토즐. There are so many handsome guys, so we often socialize or gather at night.

well, these day, you know aloms I'm going bars at 인생맥주The bar's all-wood furniture, including tables, chairs, and doors, creates a warm and inviting atmosphere. The ambiance makes you feel like you've stepped into a magical world, perfect for enjoying drinks and good company. I think particularly love their special thin ice beer, finding it refreshing and flavorful. The beer pairs perfectly with their delicious French fries, making for a satisfying experience. so I love there are reson

>> Well, these days, you know, I'm going to bars at 인생맥주. The bar's all-wood furniture, including tables, chairs, and doors, creates a warm and inviting atmosphere. The ambiance makes you feel like you've stepped into a magical world, perfect for enjoying drinks and good company. I particularly love their special thin ice beer, finding it refreshing and flavorful. The beer pairs perfectly with their delicious French fries, making a satisfying experience. Hence, I love it for these reasons.

My favorite beachs are 돌산 beach in 여수 with my friends. recently when I been to there sea view It was so wonderfull. There is a line the sea side cafes. we have many picture so I don't forgot this time and  we meet to other friend so It's long time no see her. I like We're going to play 

>> My favorite beaches are 돌산 beach in 여수 with my friends. Recently, when I was at their sea view, it was so wonderful. There is a line of seaside cafes. We have many pictures, so I didn't forget this time, and we met another friend, so it's been a long time since I saw her. I like that we're going to play.

Okay, I Tell you about the in near my home of cafe. cafe name is 코히야I like watched the cafe shop interior. l like coffe and there having the mood nice so I uselly go to cafe because there interior is cute of tiny. I think,  I go to every single day and It's just conveniently for me

>> Okay, let me tell you about the cafe near my home. Its name is 코히야. I liked watching the cafe shop interior. I like coffee, and the mood there is nice, so I usually go to cafes because their interior is cute and tiny. I think I go there every single day, and it's just convenient for me.

I like the most favorit place it's 갈변 beach in 서천 of are 충청남도 because my feeling is realacity of the beach. befor I worked pamarcy in 서천 so everytime I have many stressde whenever I go to the company. so almost I go to there when I get the stress. it was of help to me. there placed to head the ocean a road it's vey beautyful 

>> I like my most favorite place, which is 갈변 Beach in 서천, 충청남도, because of the serene atmosphere it provides. Before, I worked at a pharmacy in 서천, so I would experience a lot of stress every time I went to the company. Therefore, whenever I feel stressed, I almost always go to 갈변 Beach. It has been quite helpful for me. There is a road leading to the ocean; it's incredibly beautiful.

well, I don't often go to concert but recetly I went to the water concert in Deajun. there shoot me to water It's very fun br. the concert atmosphere was amazing because there are so laud and energized. we are play the water concert all day and l like lisen to mucis, l was a hip hop gril 

>> Well, I don't often go to concerts, but recently, I went to a water concert in Daejeon. They shot water, and it was so much fun! The concert atmosphere was amazing because it was loud and energized. We played at the water concert all day, and I like listening to music. I am a hip-hop girl.

I have a friend, she name is harin. she is very a doable person. I forgot have to time with her. she have spcial poin to kind so I'm rest mind by her. it's reason why I like her

>> I have a friend, her name is Harin. She is a very amiable person. Sometimes, I forget how to spend time with her, but she has a special way of being kind, and it puts my mind at ease. That's one of the reasons why I like her.

I have a childhood friend that I remember. Her name is Shinhye, and she is tall and pretty. She always tries to prove herself, so much so that there is no one who doesn't like her. Seeing that, I remember always trying to act like her. She is now married and has a child. She is currently pregnant. We still meet and keep in touch. She has become an indispensable and eternal friend to me

>> I have a childhood friend whom I fondly remember. Her name is Shinhye, and she is tall and pretty. She has always had a way of proving herself, making it hard for anyone not to like her. Witnessing her confidence, I used to try to emulate her. Now, she is married and has a child. She is currently pregnant. Despite life's changes, we still meet and keep in touch. She has become an indispensable and eternal friend to me.

My favorite neighbor is Aunt Lee Soon-i. She lives below our house and always brings us delicious kimchi whenever something good happens. She is a hard worker and always gets up early in the morning to feed and water her pets. The reason I like her is because she is very kind to us. When I was young, she would take care of me when I was home alone. I was so grateful that Aunt Lee Soon-i would often step in to take care of me when my parents were busy. This is why I like her.

>> My favorite neighbor is Aunt Lee Soon-i. She lives below our house and always brings us delicious kimchi whenever something good happens. She is a hard worker, getting up early in the morning to feed and water her pets. The reason I like her is that she is very kind to us. When I was young, she would take care of me when I was home alone. I was so grateful that Aunt Lee Soon-i would often step in to look after me when my parents were busy. This is why I like her.

Koreans are increasingly interested in street fashion and hip-hop fashion. It is common to see people in Korea wearing a mix of street fashion and hip-hop fashion. For example, people in Korea often wear baggy jeans with cropped tops. jogger pants are a popular choice for both leisure and workwear in Korea. I once got so hooked on wearing jogger pants that I wore them every day for a week.

>> Koreans are showing a growing interest in street fashion and hip-hop fashion, with many people in Korea embracing a combination of these styles. For instance, it's common to see individuals wearing baggy jeans paired with cropped tops. Jogger pants have become a popular choice for both leisure and workwear in Korea. I once became so enamored with jogger pants that I wore them every day for a week.

I prefer casual looks these days. Because casual looks are versatile enough to be worn at work, at play, or anywhere in between. I wore a gray sweater and baggy jeans today. "I really like the pants I'm wearing now. They are fashionable and comfortable, so I wear them often these days."

>> I prefer casual looks these days because they are versatile enough to be worn at work, at play, or anywhere in between. Today, I chose a gray sweater paired with baggy jeans. I really like the pants I'm wearing now; they are fashionable and comfortable, so I've been wearing them often recently.

I wore a gray sweater and baggy jeans today. I really like the pants I'm wearing now. They are fashionable and comfortable, so I wear them often these days.

>> CORRECT!

 

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