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Do you always follow work guidelines? Why or why not? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences.

Yes, I do. Because I don't want to cause unpredictable problems in school.
If there are caused unpredictable problems when I don't follow work guidelines, I can't treat them properly.
And because I can cooperate with my fellow teacher in school.
Following work guidelines means having a unity.
So, I will do many things with my fellow teacher in various areas.

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Beautiful day to you, Ku Tae! It is really good of you to follow work guidelines. As teachers, we should also set good examples to our students. It is also correct that by following rules and regulations, it will prevent from causing any problems in the future. Have a great day!~T. Lyn
Yes, I do. 
>>Correct. or Yes, I do. I follow work guidelines.
Because I don't want to cause unpredictable problems in school.
>>It is because I don't want to cause unexpected problems at school.
If there are caused unpredictable problems when I don't follow work guidelines, I can't treat them properly.
>>if unpredictable problems arise due to failure to follow work guidelines, they can't be handles properly.
And because I can cooperate with my fellow teacher in school.
>>And because I can collaborate with my fellow teacher at school.
Following work guidelines means having a unity.
>>Correct. or Following work guidelines and instructions means harmony and unity.
So, I will do many things with my fellow teacher in various areas.
>>So, I will be doing a lot of work in a variety of fields with my fellow teachers.
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