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How do you think transportation will change in the future?

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1. Increase the subway
In our country, it is rare to go to another city by subway. Rather, I ride an intercity bus.
But, since subways are cheaper than intercity buses, I think it would be good to increase more subways.

2. Airplane
There are many airports in Korea, but there are not many flights to other countries except gimpo airport and Inchoen airport.
and We have to make a layover to go to another country.
In the future, I think all airports will probably have more national filght.

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Thank you for this Eunice!

1. Increase the subway
In our country, it is rare to go to another city by subway. 
>>> correct 
Rather, I ride an intercity bus.
>>> correct 
But, since subways are cheaper than intercity buses, I think it would be good to increase more subways.
>>> correct 
>>> OR: But, since subways are cheaper than intercity buses, I think it would be good to extend the subways.
2. Airplane
There are many airports in Korea, but there are not many flights to other countries except gimpo airport and Inchoen airport. 
and We have to make a layover to go to another country.
>>>  There are many airports in Korea, but there are not many flights to other countries except in Gimpo airport and Inchoen airport. In addition, we have to make a layover to go to another country.
In the future, I think all airports will probably have more national filght.
>>>  In the future, I think all airports will probably have more international flights.
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