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Only I can make the dishes in my family.
So I am a person who is charge of their health.
I wonder If I were sick, how long can my husband endure me while I am having sickness.
I think Role of mother is most important to keep the home.

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Good morning, Ms. Sunny!
I agree with you. By the way, I don' cook in our house, my mom does. So if she is angry, we will be having bland food. We try to make her happy always for us to have sumptuous meals. haha!
Have a good day!
Aki~

Only I can make the dishes in my family.
>> CORRECT!

So I am a person who is charge of their health.
>>>  So I am a person who is in charge of their health.

I wonder If I were sick, how long can my husband endure me while I am having sickness?
>>> CORRECT!

I think Role of mother is most important to keep the home.
>>> I think the role of the mother is the most important in keeping the home.
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