¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Homework

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*¿ì
2023-12-26 2534

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

I am sorry.
Suddenly, severe stomachache began during the class.
I couldn't help but stoping the class.
Maybe, that's because I ate too much food last night.
Fortunately, I am alright now.
Meanwhile, there was a call from her who trys to steal our money.
She left the message that she wanted to talk with the related counselling manager.
However, we won't do anything for her.
I am sure that she also knows that the scar is not a big deal.
With only a tiny scar, she can't sue us, so she is trying to induce any further mistake of ours.
We won't react to her.
If she makes more trouble, so it bothers our work more, we will call the police immediately.
Maybe, she is more stressed than us because we don't do anything for her purpose.
Thus, I decided to enjoy this situation.
As for my assignment, of course, children's character is influenced by their performance like singing, dancing, and playing in the stage.
But, I think that genetic factor is more important to make one's charactor.
See you.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello, Dr. Kim!

No worries about your stomachache the previous day. Lately, I have been having stomachache too. The food and the weather might be aggravating our stomach status. Anyway, I hope that yours is already doing better.

I guess this lady is a case of bullying because when people repeatedly and intentionally use words or actions against someone or a group of people to cause distress and risk to their wellbeing, it is considered bullying.

Human beings do not like to believe that they are inherently evil in their acts. It makes them feel bad about themselves but still, they are so delusion themselves or lie to themselves. One step to addressing their negativity is to be the person who listens to and understands them. Enabling their behaviors may have the potential to encourage harmful tendencies to you and your staff.

You are right, you would better call the police when necessary.

Be careful with spelling of words all the time. For the other suggestions, you can study them below. You did so well!

See you soon.

-T. Donna~

I am sorry.
>> Correct!

Suddenly, severe stomachache began during the class.
>> Correct!

I couldn't help but stoping the class.
>> Correct!
Or: stopping

Maybe, that's because I ate too much food last night.
>> Correct!

Fortunately, I am alright now.
>> Correct!

Meanwhile, there was a call from her who trys to steal our money.
>> Correct!
Or: tries

She left the message that she wanted to talk with the related counselling manager.
>> Correct!

However, we won't do anything for her.
>> Correct!

I am sure that she also knows that the scar is not a big deal.
>> Correct!

With only a tiny scar, she can't sue us, so she is trying to induce any further mistake of ours.
>> Correct!
Or: With only a tiny scar, she can't sue us, so she is trying to induce any further mistake from us.

We won't react to her.
>> Correct!

If she makes more trouble, so it bothers our work more, we will call the police immediately.
>> Correct!

Maybe, she is more stressed than us because we don't do anything for her purpose.
>> Correct!

Thus, I decided to enjoy this situation.
>> Correct!

As for my assignment, of course, children's character is influenced by their performance like singing, dancing, and playing in the stage.
>> ...on stage

But, I think that genetic factor is more important to make one's charactor.
>> Correct!
Or: character

See you
>> Correct!

¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
131882 HOMEWORK: Please write a short paragraph about ¡°What are the... ¾Ù* ¿Ï·á 2023-10-24 2
131881 Plans ÀÌ*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2023-10-24 3535
131880 Homework ½Å*È­ ¿Ï·á 2023-10-24 5163
131879 Homework ½Å*È­ ¿Ï·á 2023-10-24 4325
131878 Homework Á¤*ȯ ¿Ï·á 2023-10-24 3847
131877 After school, convenience store. ±è*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2023-10-24 3749
131876 Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-10-24 4941
131875 About my lunch break during workdays. ±Ç*ÀÏ ¿Ï·á 2023-10-24 3
131874 Why do so many people love traveling? ½Å*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2023-10-24 3963
131873 homework Á¤*¾È ¿Ï·á 2023-10-24 1
131872 WRITING TASK: What is the best place for a picnic? ÀÓ*Áö ¿Ï·á 2023-10-24 3
131871 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2023-10-24 0
131870 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2023-10-24 0
131869 In your case, how do you usually celebrate Christmas? ÀÌ*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2023-10-24 2
131868 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2023-10-24 0
131867 How to influence ¾ç*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-10-24 3591
131866 hello ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-10-24 3
131865 tour ±Ç*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2023-10-24 4264
131864 Have you ever planned to work in a hospital? ·ù*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2023-10-24 3
131863 Do you like attending family gatherings? ·ù*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2023-10-24 3

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04