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My feelings hearing \"Hi\" to someone

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2024-01-05 1869

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When I met someone at the first time and he/she says "Hi", I feel very awkward.
Because I'm introvert person and I don't have any information about him/her, so this situation makes me uncomfortable.

But there are some cases I can adjust this situation.
First, I don't care that my friend's parents say "Hi" even though we meet first time.
Because I'm younger than them, and I get informations who they are to my friends.

Second, I don't care that strangers says "Hi" in my office.
Because I'm a junior, and there are so many senior members in my office.
So It's okay that senior met first time says "Hi" to me!

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Good job, Min! You were able to share your thoughts about saying ¡°Hi¡± to strangers. You have also given concrete examples. ^^ I have updated some tenses in your sentences.
-Khai
When I met someone at the first time and he/she says "Hi", I feel very awkward.

>> When I meet someone for the first time and he/she says, "Hi," I feel very awkward.

Because I'm introvert person and I don't have any information about him/her, so this situation makes me uncomfortable.

>> It is because I'm an introverted person and I don't have any information about him/her, so this situation makes me uncomfortable.

But there are some cases I can adjust this situation.

>> But there are some cases where I can adjust to this situation.

First, I don't care that my friend's parents say "Hi" even though we meet first time.

>> First, I don't care if my friend's parents say "Hi," even though we meet for the first time.

Because I'm younger than them, and I get informations who they are to my friends.

>> It is because I'm younger than them, and I get information about who they are from my friends.

Second, I don't care that strangers says "Hi" in my office.

>> Second, I don't care if strangers say "Hi" in my office.

Because I'm a junior, and there are so many senior members in my office.

>> It is because I'm a junior, and there are so many senior members in my office.

So It's okay that senior met first time says "Hi" to me!
>> So it's okay if a senior who I met for the first time says "Hi" to me!

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