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I experienced a bad day in the summer. My hands and feet sweat a lot. So, in the summer, I like to wear bright-colored clothes, but my hands sweat a lot, and the sweat gets on them and gets stained and dirty, which makes me feel bad. Additionally, your feet will sweat, so if you wear pretty, cool shoes, your feet will become slippery due to sweat, or your sweat-stained shoes will become dirty. It's the season when you get upset because even if you decorate and go out, it quickly becomes a mess.

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Hello once again, Eliana!
I feel sorry that you have this kind of condition but I commend you on how you handled this bad day of yours. I don't know how you do it but it is great to know that you overcome this situation every day.
Thank you for sharing this.
T. Aki~

I experienced a bad day in the summer.
>>> CORRECT!

My hands and feet sweat a lot.
>>> CORRECT!

So, in the summer, I like to wear bright-colored clothes, but my hands sweat a lot, and the sweat gets on them and gets stained and dirty, which makes me feel bad.
>>> CORRECT!

Additionally, your feet will sweat, so if you wear pretty, cool shoes, your feet will become slippery due to sweat, or your sweat-stained shoes will become dirty.
>>> CORRECT!

It's the season when you get upset because even if you decorate and go out, it quickly becomes a mess.
>>> CORRECT!
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