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Hi, teacher Divina
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What makes your job fun?
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When i work, defferent country people are toking for me

teacher, what should i do to be good at English?

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Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Thank you for answering your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some things to consider:

1. When i work, defferent country people are toking for me
>>When I work, people from different country talk to me.


NOTE: There are many ways to improve your English if you really want to 

These are the things that helped me before:
1. Read English news/books.
2. Listen to English songs.
3. Watch some English shows/movies.
4. Keep a list of new words that you learn.
5. Practice the basics. (Grammar is very important.)

If you have questions in English, please feel free to ask me, okay? 
Also, tell me if you don't understand something in class so that I can help you. ^^
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