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It is common knowledge that vegetables and fruits are good for our health.
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1. Just looking at vegetables and fruits of various colors makes my eyes happy. So it helps to reduce stress.
2. Fruits and vegetables have vitamins and cancer preventing ingredients. It makes our body healthy.
3. Fruits and vegetables are high in dietary fiber which can prevent constipation.
4. Fruits and vegetables hepe us weight loss because they are low in calories.

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Thank you for sharing the benefits of fruits and vegetables. You did a great job, Mia! ^^
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It is common knowledge that vegetables and fruits are good for our health.

>> CORRECT

1. Just looking at vegetables and fruits of various colors makes my eyes happy. 

>> CORRECT

OR

>> The colors of the vegetables and fruits make my eyes happy.

So it helps to reduce stress.

>> CORRECT

OR

>> They reduce my stress.

2. Fruits and vegetables have vitamins and cancer preventing ingredients. 

>> CORRECT

It makes our body healthy.
>> It makes our bodies healthy.
3. Fruits and vegetables are high in dietary fiber which can prevent constipation.

>> CORRECT

OR

>> Fruits and vegetables are high in dietary fiber which can aid our digestion.

4. Fruits and vegetables hepe us weight loss because they are low in calories.

>> Fruits and vegetables help us lose weight because they are low in calories.


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