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I almost believe my doctor¡¯s order and his experiences.
He have treated many patients
So he might deal with patients like me.
Doctor can treat people with their study and many experience although they didn¡¯t look at inside of their body¡¯s.
Most of all my trust about my doctor can make me relax.

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Good morning, Ms. Sunny!
Be mindful of your expressions " almost" and "might" because these expressions denote that you are NOT 100% sure.
Doctors can be like pilots too, we entrust our lives to them whenever we need their service. But take note, like what you mentioned yesterday that your doctor is not God. Give your trust fully to God first and second to these people whom he uses as instruments to help us.
Have a wonderful day!
T. Aki~

I almost believe my doctor¡¯s order and his experiences.
>>> CORRECT!
or >> At most. I believe my doctor's order and with his experiences.

He have treated many patients.
>>> He has treated many patients.

So he might deal with patients like me.
>>> So he can deal with patients like me.

Doctor can treat people with their study and many experience although they didn¡¯t look at inside of their body¡¯s.
>>> Doctors can treat people with their studies and many experiences although they don¡¯t look at the inside of their bodies.

Most of all my trust about my doctor can make me relax.
>>> Most of all my trust in my doctor can make me relax.

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