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All of the people know environment is getting deteriorating
However, if we protect earth, it would be possible to save the earth.
So, I think it's possible.
There are some ways to save the earth.
First, we should not use a plastic straw and a plastic bag.
Try to drink without straw and use an eco bag.
Second, we should not waste water.
Finally, we should recycle products.
Therefore, if we try to protect earth through some ways, the effort would not be idle.

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Hi Julie!
We were not able to say goodbye.
However, I want to use this chance to tell you that you have been a delight to talk to.
You are very smart and you truly have a lot of potential.
Keep working hard and having fun.
You are a really special girl and I hope you never forget that.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
All of the people know environment is getting deteriorating
>> All people know that our environment is deteriorating. 
However, if we protect earth, it would be possible to save the earth.
>> Correct
So, I think it's possible.
>> Correct
There are some ways to save the earth.
>> Correct
First, we should not use a plastic straw and a plastic bag.
>> Correct
Try to drink without straw and use an eco bag.
>> Try to drink without a straw and use an eco bag.
Second, we should not waste water.
>> Correct
Finally, we should recycle products.
>> Correct
Therefore, if we try to protect earth through some ways, the effort would not be idle.
>> Therefore, if we try to protect earth through different ways, our efforts would not be in vain.
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