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I think modern technology is creating a single-world culture.
Because modern technology is making the world's culture uniform.
For example, the latest technology, artificial intelligence is being used almost everywhere, so products with only different names are being released.
However, if you think about it differently, not only is there no difference from other countries, but also new technologies are created using that technology, so I think it is a good thing in terms of development.

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I think modern technology is creating a single-world culture.
Because modern technology is making the world's culture uniform.
For example, the latest technology, artificial intelligence is being used almost everywhere, so products with only different names are being released.
However, if you think about it differently, not only is there no difference from other countries, but also new technologies are created using that technology, so I think it is a good thing in terms of development.
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