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I started speaking English in front of other students before 2 years ago.
I got stressed a lot at first.
I was conscious of their gaze.
After attending the class Power English.
I am not shy gradually.
Because foreign teacher is more uncomfortable existence than Korean teacher and its students.
So I don¡¯t care about other¡¯s thoughts now.

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Great day, Ms. Sunny!
It makes me happy to hear that you feel comfortable using the english language.  Always find opportunitties where you can use this (English) to establish fluency. Have a gdo day!
Aki~

I started speaking English in front of other students before 2 years ago.
>>>I started speaking English in front of other students before 2 years ago.

I got stressed a lot at first.
>>> CORRECT!

I was conscious of their gaze.
>>> CORRECT!

After attending the class Power English.
>>> After attending the class at Power English.
>>> After I attend classes at Power English.

I am not shy gradually.
>>> I am gradually not feeling shy.

Because foreign teacher is more uncomfortable existence than Korean teacher and its students.
>>> Because the presence of the foreign teacher is more uncomfortable than  the Korean teacher and its students.

So I don¡¯t care about other¡¯s thoughts now.
>>> CORRECT!
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