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I am trying to see the life of artist through their works of art.
They threw them their feelings and dreams.
I like picture such as scenery and people.
I can¡¯t understand abstract picture.
But l admire that they can come out their feelings with drawing.
They seem like enjoying their life.

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Good day, Ms. Sunny!
I admire people who can express themselves in the form of art. A lot of people express their emotions especially their angry verbally but most artists do it in an art way. If people learned how to do that, what do you think will happen?
Aki~

I am trying to see the life of artist through their works of art.
>>> I am trying to see the life of the artist through their works of art.

They threw them their feelings and dreams.
>>> They express their feelings and dreams.

I like picture such as scenery and people.
>>> I like pictures od scenery and people.

I can¡¯t understand abstract picture.
>>> I can¡¯t understand abstract pictures.

But l admire that they can come out their feelings with drawing.
>>> CORRECT!

They seem like enjoying their life.
>>> CORRECT!

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