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HOMEWORK FOR 01/29:
Writing Task: Do you prefer to work on important tasks in the morning or later in the day?
I would say I prefer to work on important tasks in the morning. Because i think i am a morning person who is able to wake up early. I feel i am invigorated in the morning than afternoon or evening.

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Hey there, Dongeun!

Working early in the morning can be better for productivity because you often wake up in better spirits than you went to sleep the night before. Aside from that, working early in the morning is also great for following routines and sticking to your schedule as there are very few distractions. 

HOMEWORK FOR 01/29:
Writing Task: Do you prefer to work on important tasks in the morning or later in the day?

I would say I prefer to work on important tasks in the morning. Because i think i am a morning person who is able to wake up early. 
>> Correct.
Or >> I suppose I like to work on important projects first thing in the morning, as I consider myself to be an early riser and morning person. 
I feel i am invigorated in the morning than afternoon or evening. 
>> I feel more invigorated in the morning than in the afternoon or evening.
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