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The right situaition to complain in the restourent is, when the hair comes out of the food,
the food is different from what you had ordered, or the table next to it is loud.
But I don't usally make a complain. Because I'm to shy to do so.
And my father is keep trying to make me so.
But still, Ithink the situaitions on top is the situaition that I must? complain.

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Hello Onew!
What you wrote reminded me of an experience I had at a restaurant on Saturday haha. I'll tell you about it in class next time. See you then and great job as always! ^^
~~Teacher Kate 

The right situaition to complain in the restourent is, when the hair comes out of the food, The food is different from what you had ordered, or the table next to it is loud.
>>The right situation to complain in a restaurant is when the we find hair in the food, the food is different from what you had ordered, or the table next to yours is loud.
But I don't usally make a complain. Because I'm to shy to do so.
>>But, I don't usually make a complaint because I'm too shy to do so.
And my father is keep trying to make me so.
>>However, my father keeps trying to make me do so.
But still, Ithink the situaitions on top is the situaition that I must? complain.
>>But still, I think the situations I mentioned above are the things I must complain about.
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