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Men of Korea have tendency to like eating stamina food.
They even drink blood of deer and boiled snake.
3years ago, my husband had me drink white soup.
He said to me it¡¯s a carp .But it was snake.
I was really disgusted.
I don¡¯t understand them how could they eat snake or lived blood.

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Good day, Ms. Sunny!
Thank you for sharing this I realized that Korean men were like Chinese people who almost consume everything. I heard also in China that they eat everything to maintain their good health. I don't understand also, but I respect their culture.
Aki~

Men of Korea have tendency to like eating stamina food.
>>> Men in Korea tend to eat food that boosts their stamina.

They even drink blood of deer and boiled snake.
>>>They even drink the blood of deer and boiled snakes.

3 years ago, my husband had me drink white soup.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> Three years ago, my husband let me drink "white soup"

He said to me it¡¯s a carp .But it was snake.
>>>  He told me it was carp, but it was a snake.

I was really disgusted.
>>> I was truly disgusted.

I don¡¯t understand them how could they eat snake or lived blood.
>>> I don¡¯t understand how could they eat snakes or drink blood.

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